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Poetry - JJJ - 08-16-2008 04:16 PM Fine fine so you got the answer to my first riddle poem, scroll down this page to see the answer to the riddle, or take a guess and see if your right before you do so. Code: From seemingly nothing And the following are a few random poems that I decided to write and share. Quote:In the light the darkness breaks Quote:Piercing thorns, crimson tears Quote:Floating on a cloud Okay here is the next thing for you guys to solve, the following poem has an extremely strict poetic structure, so lets see if you guys can figure out what that structure is, and what this type of a poem is called. Oh and try not to cheat and use the internet to help you find the answer, because that's just no fun. Code: There once was two figures seen in the black RE: Poetry - Frogboy - 08-16-2008 04:23 PM it's the morning dew RE: Poetry - reechani - 08-16-2008 04:23 PM I think it is either 1) Snow OR 2) Morning Dew if im wrong, ah well. RE: Poetry - Neuneck - 08-16-2008 04:24 PM I say it's a SNOWFLAKE JJJ Wrote:From seemingly nothing -> water RE: Poetry - JJJ - 08-16-2008 04:31 PM hehe keep guessing ppl~ its rather specific =3 EDIT: heres a hint, theres not a single line in there thats not important RE: Poetry - Kadar - 08-16-2008 04:35 PM hoarfrost RE: Poetry - Frogboy - 08-16-2008 04:39 PM no, it's morning frost or dew, probably leaning more towards the frost as that has more crystalline like structure to it. using nuen's structure i'll show why as well: From seemingly nothing we come from the air --> a morning dew/frost Grasping at anything there Covering and coating all that we can --> if you've ever been up before the sun rises on a cold day you will know that there is water/frost on your car, mailbox, sidewalk, grass, roof, etc... Coloring the ground just like little pearls --> usually means frozen water Crushed by the feet of men, women and merls --> frost covered grass/road/sidewalk And as the temperature drops we do rise --> the colder it gets the more you see the frost on the ground Never collected and balled like it's brother ... --> the brother of frost is snow, snow is balled, but frost is not as its structure is not stable enough to do so typically And often annoying the windows of another --> this is a reference of frost on windows making it hard to see out of the windows, typically when driving We are often a sign of what is to come --> a reference to weather meaning that it will be an overcast day meaning rain or snow is going to be coming soon And yet it's in the shadows where we feel most at home --> in the sun frost melts and is no longer there, but in the shadows it stays nice But even on sunny days you may find us on your lawn gnome --> this typically happens when it's a really cold day and even though the sun is out, the temperature is still really low Come take a look at our crystal arms --> frost has a crystalline structure to it For if you touch us we might bite --> frost will stick to your finger if you touch it, and it feels like a burn/bite But your warmth will surely put us out of sight --> frost melts real quick to the touch, in almost an instant it will turn to water And as the next dawn comes so shall we --> this is the one that keeps me from saying it is snow as not every dawn will there be snow, but just about every dawn there will be frost/dew. RE: Poetry - JJJ - 08-16-2008 04:39 PM =P smarty pants~ you coulda just have said frost in general if you wanted too XD RE: Poetry - GM-Ayu - 08-16-2008 04:52 PM Not a tough riddle, the crystal arm line seriously gave it away ;p RE: Poetry - JJJ - 08-16-2008 05:05 PM rawr yet ppl still guessed the wrong thing eh? =3 |