Thanks Pyro.
Static - since you are sincerely interested, and because I am sincerely interested in your thoughts on it, I reuploaded the song with a different bassline. I agree with you, that the bass didn't feel right in the song - I just never changed it because I couldn't really find much of a better sound. But I got an idea for a sustained bassline thinking about the subs in my friend's car. Those things profusely amplify the bass... anyway, I don't have subs so I can't hear how what I came up with sounds like. Tell me how it sounds to you.
Also, I added a little hi-hat loop at the beginning to make the introduction a bit more interesting. And, it shouldn't be clipped
as much as before.
It wasn't my intent to make this into a discussion about the semantics of the song and to have people download several copies to see which are better or worse, but as long as you're interested, Static, I'd be glad to hear your input.